Table of Contents
1. Introduction
ChatGPT, a state-of-the-art (SOTA) generative AI chatbot, has garnered immense popularity for its potential to transform education, particularly in English as a Foreign Language (EFL) writing contexts. However, effective collaboration with ChatGPT requires students to master prompt engineering—the skill of crafting precise instructions to elicit desired outputs. This paper examines the content and patterns of EFL secondary students' prompts when completing a writing task with ChatGPT for the first time. Through a case study of four distinct pathways, the authors illustrate the trial-and-error process and highlight the need for explicit prompt engineering education in EFL classrooms.
2. Literature Review
2.1 ChatGPT in EFL Writing
ChatGPT can assist EFL students by generating ideas, providing vocabulary suggestions, and offering grammatical corrections. However, without proper prompting, outputs may be irrelevant or unhelpful. Research by Guo et al. (2023) indicates that students often struggle to formulate effective prompts, leading to suboptimal interactions.
2.2 Prompt Engineering as a Skill
Prompt engineering involves understanding the model's capabilities and limitations. It requires iterative refinement, specificity, and contextual awareness. Studies (e.g., Woo et al., 2023) show that non-technical users, including EFL students, typically engage in trial-and-error without systematic strategies.
3. Methodology
3.1 Participants and Setting
Participants were 12 secondary school EFL students (ages 15-16) from Hong Kong. They used ChatGPT on iPads for the first time to complete a descriptive writing task: "Describe your favorite place and explain why it is special to you."
3.2 Data Collection
Data were collected via iPad screen recordings, capturing every prompt typed and ChatGPT's response. Researchers also conducted post-task interviews to understand students' reasoning.
3.3 Analytical Framework
The analysis categorized prompts by content (e.g., request for ideas, grammar help, revision) and quantity (number of prompts per student). Four distinct pathways emerged from the data.
4. Findings: Four Prompt Engineering Pathways
4.1 Pathway A: Direct Instruction
Students issued a single, comprehensive prompt (e.g., "Write a 200-word paragraph about my favorite beach, including sensory details"). This pathway yielded acceptable results but limited student engagement with the writing process.
4.2 Pathway B: Iterative Refinement
Students started with a broad prompt (e.g., "Help me write about my favorite place") and refined it based on ChatGPT's output (e.g., "Add more details about the sound of waves"). This pathway demonstrated learning through feedback.
4.3 Pathway C: Scaffolded Decomposition
Students broke the task into sub-tasks: first asking for an outline, then requesting vocabulary, and finally asking for a full draft. This structured approach resulted in higher-quality outputs and deeper understanding.
4.4 Pathway D: Exploratory Trial-and-Error
Students experimented with varied prompts without a clear strategy (e.g., "Give me ideas", then "Make it longer", then "Change the tone"). This pathway was inefficient and often led to frustration.
5. Discussion
5.1 Core Insight
The study reveals that most EFL students default to trial-and-error prompting, lacking systematic strategies. Only a minority (Pathway C) demonstrated effective decomposition, which aligns with principles of metacognitive scaffolding (Flavell, 1979).
5.2 Logical Flow
The progression from Pathway A to D shows a spectrum of student agency and strategic depth. The most effective pathway (C) mirrors expert prompt engineering practices: task decomposition, iterative refinement, and contextual specificity.
5.3 Strengths & Flaws
Strengths: The study provides rich qualitative data through screen recordings, capturing authentic student behavior. The four-pathway typology is intuitive and actionable for educators.
Flaws: Small sample size (n=12) limits generalizability. The study does not measure writing quality improvement quantitatively. Additionally, the novelty effect of first-time ChatGPT use may skew behavior.
5.4 Actionable Insights
Educators should explicitly teach prompt engineering strategies, such as:
- Task decomposition: Break complex writing tasks into smaller sub-prompts.
- Iterative refinement: Use ChatGPT's output as feedback to improve prompts.
- Context provision: Include role, audience, and format in prompts (e.g., "You are a travel blogger writing for teenagers").
6. Technical Details & Mathematical Formulation
Prompt engineering can be modeled as an optimization problem. Let $P$ be the prompt space, $O$ the output space, and $f: P \rightarrow O$ the ChatGPT function. The goal is to find $p^*$ such that:
$$p^* = \arg\max_{p \in P} \, \text{Relevance}(f(p), T)$$
where $T$ is the target writing task. The relevance function can be approximated by cosine similarity between the output embedding and the target embedding in a semantic space (e.g., Sentence-BERT). In practice, students iteratively update $p$ based on observed $f(p)$:
$$p_{t+1} = p_t + \alpha \cdot \nabla \text{Score}(f(p_t), T)$$
where $\alpha$ is a learning rate and Score is a heuristic quality metric. This mirrors gradient ascent in latent space, though students do so intuitively.
7. Experimental Results & Diagram Description
Figure 1: Distribution of Pathways
A bar chart showing the frequency of each pathway: Pathway A (3 students), Pathway B (4), Pathway C (2), Pathway D (3). The chart indicates that iterative refinement (B) was most common, while scaffolded decomposition (C) was least common but most effective.
Figure 2: Average Number of Prompts per Pathway
A line graph: Pathway A (1.0 prompts), B (4.5), C (6.0), D (8.3). The graph shows that more prompts do not necessarily correlate with better outcomes; Pathway C used fewer prompts than D but achieved higher writing quality (rated by two EFL teachers on a 1-5 scale: C average 4.2, D average 2.8).
8. Analytical Framework Example Case
Case: Student S7 (Pathway C - Scaffolded Decomposition)
- Prompt 1: "Give me an outline for a paragraph about my favorite library. Include introduction, sensory details, and why it's special."
- ChatGPT Output: Provides a 3-point outline.
- Prompt 2: "Expand point 2 (sensory details) into 3 sentences using words like 'whisper', 'dusty', 'warm'."
- ChatGPT Output: Generates descriptive sentences.
- Prompt 3: "Combine the outline and sentences into a coherent paragraph. Use a formal tone."
- Final Output: A well-structured paragraph scoring 4.5/5.
This case demonstrates effective task decomposition and contextual specificity.
9. Future Applications & Directions
Future research should explore:
- Automated prompt coaching: AI tools that provide real-time feedback on prompt quality (e.g., "Your prompt is too vague. Try specifying the tone.")
- Cross-linguistic prompt engineering: How strategies differ for EFL vs. native speakers.
- Longitudinal studies: Tracking how students' prompt engineering skills evolve over time.
- Integration with writing curricula: Developing lesson plans that teach prompt engineering alongside traditional writing skills.
10. Original Analysis
This study makes a timely contribution by empirically mapping how novice EFL users interact with ChatGPT, revealing a critical gap between intuitive trial-and-error and strategic prompt engineering. The four-pathway framework is a valuable pedagogical tool, but the small sample size and lack of control for prior AI exposure limit its generalizability. The finding that scaffolded decomposition (Pathway C) yields superior outcomes aligns with cognitive load theory (Sweller, 1988), which posits that breaking complex tasks into manageable chunks reduces cognitive burden and enhances learning. However, the study does not address the ethical dimension: students who rely on ChatGPT for idea generation may inadvertently plagiarize or lose their own voice. Future work should integrate digital ethics training into prompt engineering curricula. Furthermore, the mathematical formulation of prompt optimization (Section 6) provides a rigorous lens, but its practical applicability to classroom settings remains unvalidated. To move forward, educators must treat prompt engineering not as a technical add-on but as a core literacy skill, akin to search engine literacy (Head & Eisenberg, 2010). Only then can students harness AI as a collaborative partner rather than a crutch.
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